"The War For Power" Feedback, Sign Up, and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Oct 8, 2010.

  1. He's 16 forgot that part
     
  2. Lolz thanks for the feedback Seth. And thanks for signing up guys. Got chapter two part two for later. And Seth, I'm a very cheap kill lmfao.

    iZaln
     
  3. Part two of chapter two is up.

    iZaln
     
  4. Omaigoodness awesome chapter, Zaln! Almost makes me wanna start working on Shounen Jump again, but I'm lazy. :3
     
  5. That was awesome zaln keep up the good work.
     
  6. Thanks and Rika, I hope you start up Shonen Jump again. It would be cool to see a story that jumps through the stories of Kaw's FanFiction lolz. But then again, jumping through mangas are cooler lolz.

    iZaln
     
  7. Name: Crank

    age: 13
    height/weight: 4ft7in / 120 lb
    Element: Earth. requires much effort to use his abilities because he is newer at his powers. but he is has natural talent. he is growing fast.
    Personality: he is very strong. he also is very quiet and keeps to himself. he is looking for friends and wants a new life because his parents were killed in a horrible accident.
    he is still weak in his powers but if u anger him he goes into an ashmetic (u cant remember what happened) state and his powers go insane. and will accidentilly hurt anyone.


    ps plz use my character and i hope u come out with your story soon!!
     
  8. o and how do i c ur story! plz wall me
     
  9. oops i forgot appearance he wears brown rags because hes poor and has dark black hair his eyes r bright brown he has no shoes. and loves trinkets and working as a blacksmith
     
  10. Name: Lazrak
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    Element/Property:
    Dark, Fire, DuelBlade, DarkDagger, Quick reflex...etc.
    Personality: Hardly speaks, Quick to danger, Fast thinking, Smart, cunning...etc.
    Appearance:Rogue Robe, Scared face, Burgandy hair, red eyes, long baggy pants...etc.
     
  11. Lol I agree Zaln perfectly fair warning.
    Great work.
    Seth
     
  12. Thanks lolz. I liked the countdown thing.

    iZaln
     
  13. Finally got the next part up... Got a whole other two part chapter already written lol.

    iZaln
     
  14. wow, nice twist, I'm excited to c what happens next!
     
  15. Name: Thaym
    Age: 12
    Clothing: Slave rags
    Short bio: An escaped slave trying to hide from everybody. He is shy because, like all slaves, he was whipped.
    Element: What do u mean by element?
     
  16. For above
    Property: A small dagger.
     
  17. Oh, nvm
    Name: Thaym
    Age: Around 12
    Bio: Escaped slave, very shy. He's scared of his own shadow.
    Property: Small dagger
    Element: Water
     
  18. Tomorrow I'll try to post more.

    iZaln