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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Oct 8, 2010.

  1. Nice chapter! Exciting!
     
  2. Name: Jordan
    Age: 21
    Gender: male
    Element: water. Considered a genius. Uses strategy and tactics to ensure victory. Calculates and acts accordingly. Is a bit lazy and likes to go with the flow.
    Appearance: slim build. Around 6 ft 3. Bright blues eyes. Black hair.
     
  3. Name: Sungo
    Age:17
    Element: Fire, a rebellious teenager Sungo mastered his powers to be able to live on his own. He has the ability to shoot fire out of his body and create a wall of fire.
     
  4. Great chapter Zaln!
     
  5. Nice Chapter
     
  6. Awsome chapter bet the next one will be even better
     
  7. Nice I like it

    name: Randall
    age: 68
    element: Earth, very wise man. Has been in many wars, a legend amongst his own people. His favourite move is to create a giant stone golem with himself being in the center of it. Can also move around freely, practically swims through the earth, he can hop ontop of a rock, and fly around. He can manipulate rock to do his bidding. (eg create homes, make rock swords, shoot spears of rocks, make defensive cacoons etc)
    appearance: brown skin, white hair, 5ft 5, brown eyes. Has scars all over his back, arms and one running accross his left cheek. Wears 7 rings that glow, which he got from either plunder or stolen when he was the general in the earth army, which increases his power. That power plus the wisdom and the experience he has gained makes him someone you want on your side of the battlefield.
     
  8. Noooooo I am so sorry zaln sooooo sorry, I just hit my head once for every
    letter that was on the story
    I'm so sorry please forgive. Ahhhhhhhj
     
  9. Is it possible to delete posts??
     
  10. Yes, you can delete posts by using the KaW web version forums. And it's alright, we all make mistakes, but I wouldn't mind you deleting it, I'd really love that lol.

    iZaln
     
  11. Actually, I think I'll recreate the story thread because of it's extra other posts =.=

    iZaln
     
  12. Actually, I think I'll recreate the story thread because of it's extra other posts =.=

    iZaln
     
  13. Name:Ilkar
    Age:19
    Gender:Male
    Personality:Doesn't talk much, keeps to himself, hard to make friends with
    Powers:Is able to create anything if given 1 day without interuptions
    Appearance:dresses in black shirt and jeans
     
  14. The final part of chapter one is posted. Chapter two will revolve around a different character.

    iZaln
     
  15. Great job zalnshame master died though I'm gonna miss him
     
  16. Amazing chapter! You are a great writer Zaln! 
     
  17. It's amazing zaln. I agree with Marian.
     
  18. Good Work
     
  19. Is it too late? Can I submit mine.
     
  20. Thanks everyone ^^

    And sure, go ahead and sign up :)

    iZaln