The survial tales from Hale Valley high FEEDBACK!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 28, 2011.

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  1. Chapter 2 posted
     
    #21 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  2. is it ok if i beg for more? lol great chapter
     
    #22 Storallelite, Jun 29, 2011
  3. Beg, grovel, kneel, yeah it's fine by me 
    Thanks I was Reading what you people have said about having too many characters so bow I'm worried :S
    But I suppose that they don't come in at the same chapter


    Love,
    Han x
     
    #23 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  4. *You people = people (the you shouldn't of been there )
     
    #24 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  5. haha don't worry about it, just keep everything originized and you should be fine. (TIP: kill off some of them if you cant't handle them all lol :D )
     
    #25 Storallelite, Jun 29, 2011
  6. Actually some body is going to die (evil laugh) but nobody will guess who it is!


    Love,
    Han x
     
    #26 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  7. New bit posted
     
    #27 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  8. New bit posted
     
    #28 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  9. yay! ok im satisfied...for now lol
     
    #29 Storallelite, Jun 29, 2011
  10. Stora you took that killing advice from me :twisted:
     
    #30 *iPimella (01), Jun 29, 2011
  11. No I did not! It's truly my own thoughts!
     
    #31 Storallelite, Jun 29, 2011
  12. New bit posted
     
    #32 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  13. Nice job! But uhh how do you know what meth's like 0.o?!

    iZaln
     
    #33 Nlaz, Jun 29, 2011
  14. Oh dear. Here comes Zaln with the probing questions 
     
    #34 *iPimella (01), Jun 29, 2011
  15. Drug awareness class.
    They have this book that you read about peoples true stories and what are the effects and stuff.
    Also one of my friends used to take Crystal Meth (he's not proud of it and he hasn't taken it for ages.)
    He's 19 now and it messed up his whole life
     
    #35 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  16. Apparently only I probe far enough xD

    Ah i see. Sympathies to your friend. Well at least its toward the story...

    iZaln
     
    #36 Nlaz, Jun 29, 2011
  17. Nice chapter. Srry about ur friend.
     
    #37 Storallelite, Jun 29, 2011
  18. I think I'm done writing for tonight


    Love,
    Han x
     
    #38 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
  19. Its not night time though lol. Its midday xP

    iZaln
     
    #39 Nlaz, Jun 29, 2011
  20. It is for me :p

    Love,
    Han x
     
    #40 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jun 29, 2011
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