I'm not sure if this was intentional, malicious, accidental, or out of ignorance but this is supposed to be a ROMANCE, so why are the boy character sign ups so unattractive? I'm gonna have to make a guide... Pale skin? Really?
Hello! As you can see, I've put part two of Chapter One up. It's called intertwined and closes the cliffhanger I left open for the audiences or the readers imagination.
Yaaaaaaay, a new chapter You write with emotion and passion, which is AWESOME. Just a little side note; if I'd walked into my classroom singing, or anyone for that matter, everyone would've began to laugh and/or stare xD But I'm guessing you have a nice class A really nice and emotional chapter, to sum it up. Great job Hugs, Sophie.
lol I can't wait to start introducing the rest of the characters. I'm still kinda upset about how everyone automatically decided this was some kind of vampire thing and put their characters as pale.
I know, but she's there on vacation/moved there Or whatever you pick, it's your story And even if you're pale, it doesn't mean that you can tan. Some pale people can, but others (like me) are forever pale Anyway, the story is AWESOMESAUCE
I love the prologue (violets birth). Ur so creative, especially with the names, I wish I had such creativity!
I'm actually trying to increase emotion in my writing. Most emotion happens in the girl PoV's, which is why I'm writing this. I LOVED THAT PART! E'mon is basically king of Saradovis btw lol.
WOW with that spoiler in writers cafe feather, I can tell this fanfic is gonna be amazing, keep at it!!