The Proper Role-Play

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Aug 7, 2011.

  1. I roll my eyes at Strom "You only pushed me over. And next time, remember to remove my sleeve blade. I could've killed you."
     
  2. "School? Marcus died? Interesting. I reckon it was from the werewolves... Anything else?" I say.
     
  3. You should no that no normal blade can kill me, Tess.
     
  4. “You and he aren't. You aren't enrolled in school, because you are to old and they wouldn't let you in anyway. I can't wait to go! What about you Tess?” I say, hyped up now.
     
  5. Forgot quotation marks again! Grr
     
  6. "And I care? I could've given you a wound to think about though." I jump down into the boat looking around.
     
  7. "So what exactly will we be doing, and how long until you come back?"
     
  8. "I'm 17 I can still go to school!" I mutter "where they teach you to kill..."
     
  9. "Well, you best be going now. Just tell me how long you'll be gone?"
     
  10. That wasn't four sentences. It has to be 3-4 sentences long.

    “I don't know. We'll be down there a long time.” I say. “You seriously newd to shower, you smell like vomit, sweat, and muddy poop!”
    I clamp my nose shut.
     
  11. (it was a direct question or response to another character, which I recall doesn't need 3-4 sentences.)
     
  12. I chuckle "No offense. But he's right!" I burst out laughing. "can't wait till we leave!" I mutter to myself.
     
  13. "You should try living outside the city!" I say as I walk down the stairs slowly.
    "Hurry up with your trip! I've got nothing to do. Besides talking to the satyr..."
     
  14. “Creatious Shiparol.” I whisper.
    The ship began to finish building itself. Lil' Elf's hammer floated out of his hand.
    It's time! I whispered into all going on the field trip. Meet me outside the Kremlin.
     
  15. "I'll fly it there. It's confusing if you don't know the levers.. Anyone want to join me for it's first flight?" I ask, jumping on deck.
     
  16. “TEST DRIVE!” I shout and jump in.
     
  17. I come up out of the water and clump up the ship and stand up soaking wet on the deck.

    "You were gonna leave me?" I ask annoyed.

    "Too bad I'm hard to shake off." I mutter.
     
  18. I'm already sitting in it, I'm sitting on the wheel as it turns an I'm running on it "WHEEEE!"
     
  19. I look at the rising ship, lighten up with a beautiful sunset reflecting of her prow.
    Sunset... Oh no, gotta get back to the camp!
    I race down the stairs and run... Seeing the cities gates closing I dive through, just missing the close. I keep running. The camp is right there! I risk a glance up, the ship is still rising in all her glory, and the moon has rose in front of me. I keep on running and look behind me, The moon's rays are about to hit me!