Tonks: rather than describing everything, try writing it as an experience. In other words, you wouldn't say "I am caught up in the chains of the world" if you were actually going through it. You might say "get me out of these f'ing chains! Who tied me up?"
When's the actual competition/ tournament start? Also I know of two people who have said they want to join but feel it's too late. More are still being accepted, right?
I'll go now if someone wants it's almost midnight n I gotta get sleep soon but I'll give it a go. Anyone?