Thank the heavens I didn't have to face off against Kimber Wolf. Nice poem Pinay Sister! iZaln~Philippines FTW. Noy 4 Prez.
Anyone up for a battle against me? im in the mood to write poetry, and we can have more than one battle going on at a time
I'll go up against you... I'm like a level 0 versus the top leveled 200 player :/ If I loose do I get eliminated? iZ
Lol no zaln! It's just for fun! And limber, this is still just practice, I just want to see how things work with 2 battles. I'll do an intermediate topic for zaln and I, I'll check my list of topics, brb!
Zaln, I think we should do lost. It's a very broad topic, so it's kinda easy. Post ur poem when ur done!
Do we all post on the greed topic? Oh well here's mine Hush now and open up yourself to be but to be only is not enough There is more to be had Be quiet Let me hunger slide my slick finger down your back sensuality experience never satisfied Devour you I will ask for more So be silent While I scream to be filled Put all of you into me and give me more I hate you and give me more me give me what I want I want I want more
Here's my poem: Being Lost What is that sense? What is that feeling? How can I describe it? How can I put it in words? Whenever I'm alone... Whenever everyone's all gone... I get a dread, I feel dead. Not a soul to converse with, Not a friend to cry with. No, you are alone. No, you are alone. It is as if the sun is gone, It is as if the moon hasn't shown. This fear... This fear... It's beyond my heart, It's beyond my mind. I run and scream, I curl up and cry. In an endless maze of white, In a pitch black hole. Never knowing where, Never knowing where. Why must it be so? Why must I be alone? Why can't I fight it? Why can't I have faith? I see no chains. I feel no bonds. Yet I know it's there. Yet it keeps my heart captive. Still, it keeps thou unknowing... Still, it keeps thou lost... Lost in your mind, Lost in your heart. Yet it all disappears, Yet it all disappears, When you are found, When He has found you... iZaln
Nice zaln, here's mine: Lost I'm moving like I'm under water It's so cold here, I wish it were hotter Lost in the woods, I'm full of fear I clutch my belongings, which I hold dear I snap every twig, break every branch It's so unreal, I hope I'm in a trance With owls hooting, and leaves that rustle I move alot quicker, away from sounds I hustle. The moon casts a scary glow I see a river, that quietly flows I sit down, so hopelessly lost I never knew what this journy would cost. I'm huddled in a ball, waiting for daylight Lay my head on a tree, pretending it's allright Without hope, the tears run down my face I'm gone from the world, left without a trace.
I like how Zaln did the whole two line thing and it was original how it didn't rhyme. But I also liked lady's because it did have a few clever rhymes in it, but I'd give it to lady. Sorry zaln. Your poem was good no doubt but it didn't seem to blend with the subject as well any other comments?
Awww! Thank Zaln! I'm now queen of something! ! Thanks kimber as well. No, Adi_Xd hasn't finished his poem yet, he has several hour yet though.