Ok, so kimber against someone, here's how it should work: I will give them a topic they have 24 hour to write a poem, what ever type, whatever length, on that topic or they are disqualified. Me and my small group of officials will judge the poem, but anyone can comment or offer feedback. We will announce the winner and give constructive feedback for both players. Make sense?
If no one else offers or comes up, it's either zaln gets slaugtered or me. Oh yes, I might lose. It depends on the topic, and we've only got a few for begginers. I'm not very good with 'happy go lucky' topics.
Shizzzzzzzzz, now LM's gonna make me face off against Kimber-Wolf. Cmon, why can't iZaln just stfu on forums? iZaln
Ok! First battle! Topic: Greed you've got 24 hours! The sooner u post ur poem, the sooner I announce the winner!
Phew. Nearly died there. But if needed, I'm willing to face off against whomever coughBEGINNERpleasecough. iZ
Got my poem ready. Not my best but I tried. And yes iZaln I'm proud to be pinoy! Greed I'm neither rich nor poor and have nothing to behold. I have litttle possessions that are worth any amount of gold. And yet you watch me with lust and greed, as if I've done a heroic deed. But I know I hold something that you have always wanted. I'm surrounded by family and friends and you look as if you've been taunted. Greed doesn't mean you want something that you can hold. You can be greedy for love, whether your weak or bold.