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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. That's a nice poem lady!!!
     
  2. lady nice as well and ur right sounds better after reading ww
     
  3. ;( what about me??
     
  4. ryan oh sorry its great and sad. but tgats the truth but in a poem. great job putting it together
     
  5. It was gd too, noone forgot about ur poem, ryandon
     
  6. Wait that's sad???!!!! That's happy compared to most of mine
     
  7. I write mostly sad poems, though idk y…
     
  8.  I'm procrastinating and this thread is empty!?!?! I don't want to do my hw yet…
     
  9. dead thread till WW does him hw
     
  10. *her, lol. Y… I don't wanna. I have all weekend
     
  11. As we reachedthe endof the street iron gates were ours to greet
    as we walked through I gave a kiss to you
    as there on the dusty floor lay our coffin of Arthur and agathore nevermore
    a flash of light the door what a sight
    this is the last time we meet
    as a choir sang a chorus of low key
    from here we were ment to part
    but nothing could seperate our intertwined hearts
    our love yours and mine
    will never loose it's shine
    as we share our love forever yours forever mine
     
  12. Anyone who wants to, write a poem about a locked gate! Anything to do with locked gates!
     
  13. Any feedback on my poem
     
  14. It's nice, and not depressing!
     
  15. Confusing
     
  16. Why is it confusing?
     
  17. the gate was locked
    the rusty iron bars,
    forgiving,sharp,
    blocking the way,
    and the only path,
    to safety,

    the gate was locked,
    covered in rust,
    locked with a metal shiny lock,
    the key was missing,


    lady I'm trying to think of more
     
  18. The gate
    Why locked?
    The gate
    Is locked!
     
  19. The key is here
    the key to feathe gate is there
    but I don't know where
    and there death lays to bar our way
    the voice of fear whispers in your ear
    you can call fire a liar
    but your true desire is to cross the fire
    no matter how dire
    and unlock the gate
    the gate to hate
     
  20. Here's a verse for the one aboveme forgot the name the gate was locked
    and covered in rust
    the key to Wichita is namely trust
    love and hate never must break the key of trust