I'm finally done sorry guys!!! I was making dinner!!! Here's mine!! XDXD What is a star I asked myself upon one rainy day Are they doors to magic worlds residing far away Are they shards of twisted hearts that shattered when they broke Did they fall from Hera's mouth as jewels when she spoke Are they lanterns in the dark to guide the lost ones home Are they crowns upon the heads of men upon their thrones Are they tears from Athena's face that splattered cross the sky Are they eyes that watch the earth and listen from up high Did they split from brother moon to make their own starlight Or did they come from sister sun to brighten up the night And every night I'll never know Why it is they choose to glow And light the dark like candles bright And guide my dreams on through the night For wether they are fallen tears Or simple hopes to banish fears The only thing I'll ever learn Is that the starts will always burn
the sword was sharp, shiny and thin, ready to fight to no mercy, his brother was dull, and bent, cowering in a bag his mother was dull, bent and with out power and hiding under a pillow his sister was sharp, and willing to show, it's pertential his dad was brave, strong and thick, on display lol it was a little idea that poped into my head
Hey. Interested, experienced. I have has poetry published in the InterNational Poetry Anthology of 2009.
Yes angus, that's poetry, although, get creative! Use similies like: the blade was as sharp as... Also, try and use descriptive language, like keen, instead of sharp, finally don't repeat words too much! Nice first poem!
I'll post this remember experianced over here: The dark, The cold, It shakes my bones, Scaring me of my own existence. The battle, Like a raging storm above my head, Drowning out my broken screams, With the uttering of gunfire. A broken soul, With broken body, A loss of hope, With lack of faith. My thoughts they blurred, But on one I focused, The thought of my children, Soon to be fatherless. Would they wail? Or would they cry? At the news of my departure. Or maybe they would not care... The world began to dim before me, Swallowing the commotion all around. And all I could do was wait helplessly, Never being able to say goodbye. The time had come, My song is ended, It was time to leave never to return, To the place I once called home. My eyes fell heavy, And I tried to fight against it, But they shut. Never again to open.
How I wish to see the dawn but I am just a lowley pawn oh I crave just to yawn but I am just a lowley pawn but the kings are second to none most of them are now gone for them the others mourn but I am just a lowley pawn