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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. The Darkness of Shadow
    The Pleasure of Shade
    The Essence of Evil
    Where all Light does fade

    The Pure do not tread here,
    In the absence of Light
    But the Darkness does call them
    In the dead of the Night

    Those who heed call
    Lose all that they are
    Few can withstand it
    But most don't go far

    They are those of the Starlight
    They stand like the Sun
    A Beacon in Darkness
    For All and for None

    They are the unknown
    They can go either way,
    To Darkness of Evil
    Or from Good they don't stray
     
  2. These are my older ones...5 years ago I believe?...
     
  3. And love...there is but a single poem I have written concerning love...still kinda incomplete, but I reached the point where I could not write in such a way that would do her justice, so all I got to was 10 lines
     
  4. I like that one shol!! Dark. I could see it on a mummy's tomb or something
     
  5. With Sparkling Eyes and Dazzling Smile
    She makes me want to stay awhile

    With Radiance of no man's dream
    An Aura, that of Worldly Queen

    With Flawless features and Lustrous Glow
    Creates Jealousy that even Angels know

    And though I'm clearly not great like She
    I'd like to know if she'd take me

    And if it's yes, I'd love to hear,
    The other, No, I've dreadful Fear
     
  6. I gtg to bed three. Cause work in the morning. Night guys. Bedbugs n stuff
     
  7. Most of mine were dark, lol. Most had something about hope in them though
     
  8. Yeah, I should too, G'nite
     
  9. Here's one for the topic "A locked chest"

    Nobody will ever understand
    The fragile young girls heart
    A single word a single breath
    Can make it shatter, fall apart

    But inside her soulmates chest
    is a locked unopened void
    A single key lays ready for her
    For the lock to develop like a polaroid

    But the chest is tightly locked
    And some completely close it
    For only the lock may open him
    She is the locks true and only fit

    When a heart is broken
    A chest is opened and free
    For they know the fit is near
    But shattered is the key

    A girls heart needs love
    And only the lock may give
    The place for her
    To safely
    Lock her heart
     
  10. Poetry
    Opposing
    Exciting
    Tricky
     
  11. Here's my poem for a locked chest!!!! I took it more literally then sholron did!! Enjoy!! XDXX ( I'm tired and it's late at night so the rhyme is pretty simple)
     
  12. My heart was a fortress, with walls of great stone
    And in it I sat, upon my cold throne 
    Deep in the darkness, ruling alone

    And then you showed up, with your heavenly eyes
    Spewing your wonderful, murderous lies
    And somehow I failed to see through the disguise

    So I let down my walls and welcomed you in 
    Deep in my castle, where no one had been
    Dazzled by stories and lies that you'd spin 

    I never suspected that it wasn't true
    I missed all the hints and I missed all the clues 
    I never suspected the traitor was you

    And in darkness we sat, in endless black night 
    As I waited for you to show me the light
    But deeper you ran, away you took
    flight 

    Into the maze of the core of my heart
    Down where my secrets and fantasies start
    And down in my dungeons you tore me apart

    You stole away with a piece of my love
    I floundered in dark as you laughed from above
    Trapped in the dirt like a broken winged dove

    And from then on I closed my heart with lock and key
    And hid away where I couldn't see
    The scar you left inside of me

    And only I hold the keys that unlock the chest
    That's hidden away in a fault in my breast
    Where my tattered heart was put down to rest


    And down in the fortress with walls of great stone 
    I sit on my thrown of cold and white bone
    And forever I'll sit ruling alone 
     
  13. Vault* not fault XD
     
  14. As you can see I'm bored XP so sorry about the double post but I fixed up some things and I think this one flows better!! XD
     
  15. My heart was a fortress, with walls of great stone
    And in it I sat, upon my cold throne 
    Deep in the darkness, ruling alone

    And then you showed up, with your heavenly eyes
    Spewing your wonderful, murderous lies
    And somehow I failed to see through the disguise

    So I let down my walls and welcomed you in 
    Deep in my castle, where no one had been
    Dazzled by stories and lies that you'd spin 

    I never suspected that it wasn't true
    I missed all the hints and I missed all the clues 
    I never suspected the traitor was you

    And in darkness we sat, in endless black night 
    As I waited for you to show me the light
    But deeper you ran, away you took
    flight 

    Into the maze of the core of my heart
    Down where my secrets and fantasies start
    And down in my dungeons you tore me apart

    You stole away with a piece of my love
    I floundered in dark as you laughed from above
    Trapped in the dirt like a broken winged dove

    Then I  closed my heart with lock and key
    And hid away where I'd never see
    The scar you left inside of me

    Only  I hold the keys that unlock the chest
    That's hidden away in a fault in my breast
    Where my tattered heart was put down to rest


    And down in the fortress with walls of great stone 
    I sit on my thrown of cold and white bone
    And forever I'll sit ruling alone 
     
  16. Nice poetry guys! Those were amazing Sholron, and the locked chest topic, well I would have taken it more literal, like a locked box... But good job they we great!
     
  17. Great poems! Any topics going on now?
     
  18. Don't think so...sadly! Lol
     
  19. Topic is an empty box

    Go go go
     
  20. I vant to join.




    Extreme beginner though