The poetry wars sign up

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. ill sign up. jus to learn something

    begginner
     
  2. Okies!!! Topics envy right? Mmm I'll try XP and irin your an outstanding poet!! XD
     
  3. Wow! both of yours are great! Here's mine:

    Envy

    Red hot and stronger than hate,
    Envy is a dangerous emotion.
    It twists your mind and morphs your thoughs,
    To make you do it's bidding.
    Anything rational is swept from your mind,
    Leaving envy in full control.
    No longer valid are your opinions,
    Envy doesn't care, it's thirst is all that matters.
    And when you've realizes the mistake you've made,
    It will be to late, envy has served it's purpose,
    And is pong gone, searching for another victim.
     
  4. Thanks guys!

    Great Marian. You really captured the feeling and power of envy.
     
  5. Ok I'm ditching the envy theme cause you guys are all done!! ( loved it lady!!) so whose up for another battle?! XD
     
  6. Lady excellent as always! Sure reap u got a topic in mind or should i pick?
     
  7. You pick XD it will probably be a better topic!! But let's go for something more specific? Like hate, love etc are all really broad topics!! XD
     
  8. Lurking...
    Lurking...
     
  9. Topic is lurking? Or you are lurking?...XP
     
  10. Lurking would be a good topic though....or mabye like " what lies beneath" as a topic...( weird movie!) XD
     
  11. Envy

    Look at you
    are you bettter than me
    with all that stuff
    You're no better than me
    with all your friends
    You're no better than me
    with all your money
    and all your fun
    all your trophies
    You think that makes you
    number one?
    That closet full of
    Designer clothes
    that box of jewelry
    diamond stud in your nose
    You're no better than me
    I bet you didn't even
    buy that fancy sports car
    Silver spoon in your baby mouth
    that's for sure
    And people only love you for what
    you have I have no doubt
    I wouldn't have fun
    At your parties anyway
    I wouldn't want to be like you
    I wouldn't want to be like you
    I wouldn't wanna
    I wouldn't
    I wanna
    I wanna be you
     
  12. Good one easy!!! It almost sounds like a song!! XD
     
  13. Where'd distance go? Haha I lost my battle partner!!
     
  14. Lol srry i got a call. Good one easy!!! How about topic eye contact?
     
  15. Hmmm interesting...could be difficult but I'll try!! XD time limit?
     
  16. As long as u need. I write quick. In tag chat we had to write on the spot while people waited lol
     
  17. Damn!! Haha I'm not that fast!
     
  18. Ill make mine long give u more time 