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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. Ok, topic: softer nights
     
  2. Of course thats how i see the words. The best thing about a vague topic is the interpretation
     
  3. I don't like my poem, but I'll show you anyway:

    Soft nights

    You're sleeping on air,
    Lifted above the lair,
    Above even the willow,
    So soft is your pillow,
    A soft night you begged for,
    And now you want many more.

    Your wishes are washed away,
    And before you is displayed,
    A dark sky at night,
    With a splatter of stars so bright,
    Flying high, to the stars you go,
    Faster you go, like a baseball thrown.

    Finally reaching your destination,
    You expierience a sensation,
    Of a soft night, like never before,
    You feel the softness in every pore,
    Soft nights so wonderful they are,
    When you sleep upon a star.
     
  4. I like it lady!! U took it in a completely different direction than i was thinking.
     
  5. Soft night

    I'm lying on clouds,
    Fluffy and soft,
    They float across the sky,
    Bringing me with them. 
    The stars are beautiful, 
    Each twinkling for us,
    To be together tonight. 
    As we float along,
    Our kisses seem surreal,
    Our touches too pure,
    Though I wouldn't trade this night,
    For anything else. 
    Suddenly I'm falling,
    The cloud fades below me,
    With you above. 
    Then I wake up,
    Realizing it was a dream,
    I wish that night was real. 
    Though the softness and the kisses seemed real,
    I still wouldn't trade that night,
    For anything. 

    I just thought of that, not sure if that was what u meant by soft nights, distance.
     
  6. Awesome ww! It wasnt what i was thinking but thats why i love vague topics. Prob my fav of yours ive read!!!
     
  7. Next topic: behind a bush hiding from the black hole in the sky.





    Just kidding lol
     
  8. Lady yours reminded me of when i hurt my shoulder and they gave me these loooooovely little pills. I called them happy pills but the bottle said vicodin lol. Ww yours brought me back to that happy daydream state that u hold onto for as long as u can after a really good dream. Its a tough call lol
     
  9. If ya still wanted to do envy lady. Ill take your challenge.
     
  10. Maybe... Sure! But can the time limit be 5 hours?
     
  11. I may be in bed by then but ill post before i crash
     
  12. Envey? Thatll be tough, but I'll give it my best shot.
     
  13. Level the world with your unhalting gaze. 
    Vanquish the walls of the psychotic maze. 
    I envied you once for your infinite power. 
    As time passes by my envy turns sour. 
    You're striding along by unhindered diversion
    Brush them aside you succeed by aversion
    Destiny shreiks beyond unchosen paths. 
    You claim them and toss them aside in your wrath. 
    Look down and around at the others. They're dying. 
    You by compare are most certainly flying. 
    You're a titan, a giant, beyond you're surpassing. 
    Ignoring your goals, your fates are amassing. 
    Through time, passing life the end is implied. 
    Thoughts of your death are of course tossed aside. 
    Truth, like a shockwave explodes; becomes nearer. 
    As i see you, myself looking back from the mirror. 
     
  14. Not my best work, but it's something.


    Never Been

    Filled up with hatered, when I saw her success,
    With spite and resentment, and I felt like a mess.
    I tried and I failed, and left without my pride,
    For there would be no integrity, if I said I simply tried.

    I glared at the whitch, but she smiled all the same,
    Rubbed it in my face, and she was to blame.
    Inside I was screaming, yelling in her face,
    And I would have done it too, if not for time and place.

    I left with empty hands, and hatred in my heart.
    It was her shining moment, but it should've been my part.
    But no one ever sees the one who did not win,
    I am invisible, as if I'd never been.

    9/29/10
     
  15. Ohh!!! Good one distance!!! I love coming on and seeing an excellent poem!!! Still time to join the topic? XD
     
  16. Ooooh very bitter!! I like it irin!! 
     
  17. Distance, that was amazing. You are a brilliant poet.
     
  18. Yep absolutely join in reap!