The poetry wars sign up

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010.

  1. ill go against u lady
     
  2. Love your Tonks, it's very clever!

    Sure kimber, I'll check for a nice topic
     
  3. How about capture?
     
  4. Oh!! Perfect timing!! Room for one more? XDXD
     
  5. I'm free, if anyone wants a battle
     
  6. Captured
    Enclosed and trapped, trying to find a way out.
    The only way is up, and I can't get out.
    The light it beckons, it calls, and yet I reach but can't get out.
    Hopelessly trapped and entangled in a net, and can't get out.
    I'm lost, I'm sick, I'm cold, I'm at death's door. I'm captured and i can't get out.
     
  7. Ok WW!! I'm free!! Let's go!! XD topic?
     
  8. Can I do captured too?
     
  9. Hatred sound gd? How long will u need?
     
  10. 30min at least! You?
     
  11. I should b done by then. Gl.
     
  12. Sure tonks, here's mine (it's terrible!)

    Captured

    My thoughts all in a jumble,
    A net I wove myself,
    To protect outsiders from my thoughts,
    Has captured me.

    I'm stuck here forever more,
    I've gone insane,
    Nothing to do, nothing to say,
    I'm captured by my own imagination.

    Twisted thoughs, 
    Mindless images,
    Fill my mind so entangled,
    That I can't escape.

    I try and undo the knot I created,
    But I just increase the snarls,
    Like a spider caught in her web,
    I mope hoplessly.

    If any hope exists,
    I know not of it,
    For I'm captured sad as it is,
    In a cage of my own lies.
     
  13. I'm gonna do hate aswell
     
  14. Hate

    Hate is black,
    It tastes like soup that's too hot,
    And smells like burnt hair,
    And reminds me of of the red hot coals of a fire,
    Hate sounds like a roaring waterfall,
    And feels like the keen edge of a blade.
     
  15. Hate

    It burns hot in my veins,
    As they walk down the hall. 
    Popular people always get the guys they want,
    It never bothered me,
    Until I saw her walking down the hall,
    Next to my boyfriend,
    Holding hands. 

    My adrenaline runs,
    My blood pumps fast,
    I walk up and snatch him away.
    I scream at her to stay away,
    Though this is not the end,
    For she will hunt me down. 
    I hate her, though she will never get him. 


    Comment pls!! I'm still experimenting with this, how did I do?
     
  16. It's good, I got a vivid picture in my mind
     
  17. Urs is gd too, got a nice picture of hate in my mine