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and not to be off topic, but my stories really arent popular

 

Im gonna get creamed

 

Kimber your really good!! your not gonna get creamed!! XDXD

 

id call them average. i guess im just not a legend yet

 

ZOMFG!! Did kimber just post on this thread?!! Dont you know who she is?! She's a legend!!!! XDXD

 

I'm coming to a blank. :x

 

what does the z stand for? lol

 

Mistype! Haha my wrist hit the button! ( it's got a mind of it's own!)

 

Desire
Desiring money will leave you with nothing.
Desiring fame will leave you insignificant.
Desiring love will leave you with hate.
Desiring beauty will leave you unsightly.
You look at people today and ask yourself, "What do I want?"
And you think to yourself, why can't they just be happy with what they've got?

I don't really like this poem but I tried. I wasn't exactly into the whole desire topic.

 

Good!!  I like how you repeated desire over and over..it helped to cement the idea! Just wondering though..,why did you split them into 3 liners?

 

Really?