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Can I post a poem? Or is it only between 4 people.

 

My hair blows back
as I sled down the hill

I scream the whole way
feeling the cool winter chill

Spinning in the saucer
I shiver as the wind picks up

Getting anxious to finish
to feel the warmth of my brand-new pup

As I I get to the end
I am met by a suprise

Waiting for me
is the beautiful sunrise
LEGENDARY_LION
Winter Breeze

As I start to go home
I sniffle then sneeze

I can't wait to come back
and feel the cool winter breeze

 

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LEGENDARY_LION Winter Breeze

My hair blows back
as I sled down the hill

I scream the whole way
feeling the cool winter chill

Spinning in the saucer
I shiver as the wind picks up

Getting anxious to finish
to feel the warmth of my brand-new pup

As I I get to the end
I am met by a suprise

Waiting for me
is the beautiful sunrise

As I start to go home
I sniffle then sneeze

I can't wait to come back
and feel the cool winter breeze

 

U can call me dusty

 

Wierd I had a Jack Russell terrier named dusty

 

My real name is Dustin but I like dusty

 

Winter Breeze
As fall leaves rustle away powdery snow takes it's place.
It makes swirls in the air and makes me shiver and pace.
It tickles my nose as an icy wind dwells.
A warm fire at the moment would be swell.
Yet my boots are frozen in their spot.
And I look at a spectacle that I've always sought.
A winter breeze makes snow fly around.
It lands with perfect precision and makes no sound.
It makes it seem as glitter flies in the air.
And when I sleep tonight, I'll be dreaming of my winter breeze and hibernating like a bear.

 

Just some simple rhymes.

 

Summers gone, the air grows chill
It fills my veins with icy thrill
I feel no warm wind caress my face 
The winter breeze now takes it's place 

I feel it creeping up my spine
It brings with it the smell of pine 
For cometh it from mountains high
Whose peaks forever reach the sky

I feel the shivers in my core
As cold seeps in through every pore
And shudder as my heart grows cold 
In winter breeze's icy hold

And in the winters darkest hours
The winter breeze reveals it's powers 
Close your doors, and lock them tight 
For winds shall howl through the night

But soon the cold shall fade away
And warmth again shall claim the day
And winter breezes will fly south 
And chill the world through winters mouth.

 

Not the greatest but I tried!! Haha all criticism welcomed!!! XDXD

 

No disrespect intended,
But the word cometh makes me laugh for some reason. But I like the rhymes you did.