KlaSSic, do u mean experienced? And easycheese, i don't know, I'm still judging the fear round, here's what I've got. Ok, finished reading all of the fear poems. Kimber- you were brave doing the everyother line rhyming thing, I've tried doing that, but everytime I do I hate how it turns out. Most of your rhymes were great, but a few just didn't flow right. Never substitute rhyming for rhythm. Easycheese- that was a great poem! The message it sent was fantastic, and although it didn't flow smoothly, it didn't need to. I think this would be better as a short story than a poem, but it was still good. IZaln- your poem was great, it didn't rhyme, but it had outstanding rhymthm. But the last stanza had more lines than the others, what's with that? For me, what really puts the icing on the cake with a good poem, is a good end line. I am your fear... I liked, but it could have been better. Personally I didn't really like how you worked fear's good side in (I'm very pesimistic, so I see the worst in things) but it was still a good poem. Adi_Xd- it was a great, rhyming, perfect flowing poem, until the $&@? Then it lost the effect it had, for me. But Your end line was spectacular. It can be improved, but it was pretty good. Ahdy- Awesome poetry! I've always been a fan of your poetry, and this is as good as ever! It flowed smothly, and rhymed perfectly. I'd love to face you in a battle alone! KlaSSic- good poem, but at the beggining it rhymed every-other, and then it rhymed every two? What happened? It Also didn't seem to capture the meaning of fear to me. But that's my oppinion.
Yeah experienced Also thnks for rating it. I dont like to conform. U can call it free rhyme, i mix up the rhymes and i like to take a different perspective at a subject than most ppl.