Abi, you've got a real budding voice. I like that you don't force the words to fit a rhyme scheme, but that it flows fairly naturally. In other words, you don't choose odd or ill-fitting words justvto keep you're rhyme going. Good job!
Today's free poem: Smudge Little smudge Dear little smudge what are you doing soiling my shirt? Are you ketchup or blood? Or some other crud no matter, you make me irate. I blot you out With stain-out or shout but still you residually remain You've ruined my day So please go away you annoying, confounding damn Smudge
I cannot write poetry despite how hard I try Whenever I attempt it, the words just seem to die My little couplet says it all