"The Mercenary" Feedback and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Sep 7, 2010.

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  1. Wow, reminds me of some r rated movie...

    iZ
     
    #41 Nlaz, Sep 12, 2010
  2. Silly Zaln, you know this series has always revolved around violence.
     
    #42 *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Sep 12, 2010
  3. Someone bump all the stories if they aren't deleted!!! :3
     
    #43 Resolution, Sep 12, 2010
  4. I know, but the sound and how the kid speaks of it, man, this would bring in a cash load if it became a movie... Reminds me of a movie though....

    iZaln
     
    #44 Nlaz, Sep 13, 2010
  5. Unfortunately they can't be bumped.  i wanted to read them too.
     
    #45 *lady-marian (01), Sep 13, 2010
  6. ...ninja assassin zaln???
     
    #46 german_idiot, Sep 13, 2010
  7. I  it 
     
    #47 *iPimella (01), Sep 13, 2010
  8. @German
    Yeah, that's it! Except they aren't Japs lol.

    iZ
     
    #48 Nlaz, Sep 13, 2010
  9. Chapter 1, Part 9. Up
     
    #49 *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Sep 13, 2010
  10. Man, now I really want to read the others! 
     
    #50 *lady-marian (01), Sep 13, 2010
  11. Lolz
     
    #51 *iPimella (01), Sep 13, 2010
  12. Chapter 1, Part 10. Up
     
    #52 *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Sep 17, 2010
  13. It's great!!!
     
    #53 *lady-marian (01), Sep 17, 2010
  14. Chapter 1, Part 11. Up
     
    #54 *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Sep 20, 2010
  15. I love ur story!
     
    #55 *lady-marian (01), Sep 20, 2010
  16. Tu es bueno
     
    #56 german_idiot, Sep 20, 2010
  17. Part 12, End of chapter 1. Up
     
    #57 *OddlyYouSawMe (01), Sep 21, 2010
  18. Long chapters, u could publish this!
     
    #58 *lady-marian (01), Sep 21, 2010
  19. Nice story!!!!! If you finish this then the chapters are long enough to make a book like marrian said
     
    #59 *TheoldDarkninja (01), Sep 21, 2010
  20. Nice touch. Btw, since mostly most are new, his original story, the first Mercenary was pretty sweet. I remember always being anxious to get home just to read a new chapter after... Yes, I am odd, but I'm a die-hard fan.

    iZaln
     
    #60 Nlaz, Sep 22, 2010
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