The magic crystal feedback

Oh I like how the twins broke into artemis' lab

 

Ahhhh don't give it away! And of course you can help.

 

YAY

 

I'll make a thread now.

 

K I want to be Orion

 

Done and done.

 

Damn it's good

 

I like it! Lol, cmon and write more!

iZ

 

Sarah reminds me of opal koboi

 

This is a really good story Marian. I like how you use 3rd person omnipotent in it. But it may get confusing for some people when you have a large group of people together in your story and you can read all their thoughts but lose track of who is thinking what.

 

I like it! Heh I'm the brother... I wonder who's older, me or Sarah? Anyway, the plot is lovable. Post more soon pls lol!

iZaln

 

No you don't have to do that! Lol. Just avoid taking a peek into all those people's brain. Lol

 

Lol that's cool.

iZ