the lost stars of aeraeol

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *F0RCEL1FEAU0RA (01), Jan 6, 2013.

  1. Lol I'm making twenty chapters ...
     
  2. Chapter 18

    Darkness everywhere is this where I belong I was born here and raised here is this my life is this how I am ended with darkness? No I feel something stronger I feel something glowing NO! I see something glowing, this is life
     
  3. Chapter 19
    As it comes towards me I see a lady no a mirror of me in jacks arms jack is crying I want to see him. I want to comfort him, I am not dead I am just sleeping I come towards me "HELLO" I say to me hello I reply "WHAT DO YOU WISH I SAY" I wish to live I reply
     
  4. Then come back to life I say and then its black

    I wake up to see jack, "hello how are you" I say. "I couldn't he better now that you're here " he replies




    And they all life happily ever after
     
  5. That's not 20 chapters! 
     
  6. Chapter 20

    Hello my name is angel angel star
    I am almost normal ... well I go to a school and have good grades and all that ... but I'm special


    To be continued in the forgotten star of aereaol
     
  7. Nice  but weirdbut nice 
     
  8. Well after reading this please read the forgotten star of aeraeol ot has better crammer and things like that also please bump this so other people can read it
     
  9. In chapter 5 you said she was good with swords and the longbow from training. But she was locked in chains and tortured for as long as she could remember... So how would she train if she was chained up?? 
     
  10. Don't ask such trivial questions. The chapters were three ****-ing sentence each, it's not worth asking so much from so little.
     
  11. I can ask what I like... So shut up noob! 
     
  12. Oh the gloves are off now! Come at me bruh!
     
  13. Ok but you'll DIE!! 
     
  14. But you see, I have a tank.
     
  15. Well I have a bigger tank 
     
  16. I have the biggest tank.
     
  17. Well mines invincible 
     
  18. Mine's bigger \\
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    First piece of art don't blame me