Chapter 8 Good he replied we need as many troops as we can ... the king has e'en strengthening his army. Ok I said I am eager to fight a war! Good he said because I'm sending you all by yourself to go scout out the kingdom. What? I said all by myself? What if something happens to me! Don't worry he said you're expendable EXPENDABLE !! I shouted really! Yeah he said and you can do the job
Well thanks a lot I said giving him a grim smile as I went to my bedroom I slept surprisingly well counting the fact that I had never slept on ground. But still that wasn't well. Hello said the officer just to catch up before you go and get youreself killed we have some catching up to do... my name is jack Dawson and I'm the leader of the rebels and you are Grace I Interupted grace who he said Grace grace star I said making up a name well then hello grace star and now you're job is to enter the kings palace and see how protected the king is. Good luck. Thanks I said as I walked towards the city. I felt scared and exited at the same time.
Chapter 9 Wait jack called after me do you need any weapons? I made my sword and yelled no. When I reached the city I thought about how I would get in ... there was a gate but I wondered how I would get in as I came closer one of the guards yelled to me pleasure or business business I replied good he said. And just like that I was in the city. As I approached the kings castle I saw on guard guarding the entrence. And decided that I could use his desguise ... but as I got nearer I realized that there were two more guards behind him .. I easily stabbed the first but the other two ran off after disposing of the body I put on the suit and sneaked in through another door .. and as I walked towards the king there were only guards in silver suits .. I was a guard in a red suit but as I walked towards the kng he turned looked right at me and laughed saying come forward and give you're report but as I walked for ward I saw a light and then ahhhhhhhhhh so much pain there must have been a wall of some sort because I was painfully stuck there the king walked forward taking a spear from one of his guards stabbed me four time In my arms and then in my legs as I fell Dow. He stabbed Mr in the stomach as blood flew from my body the king laughed as he walked o. My immovable body and then everything went black
Pretty good so far, but your grammar is really, really crappy I'm a seventh grader and it wouldn't hurt to put the right capitalization and punctuation. But anyways, good job
Chapter 10 I woke up to a horrible feeling no clothes and a odd sensation. I realized I was back in my same cell but modifactations had been made instead of hanging by my arms I was now upside down and my cell had been moved under a outhouse filth and grime were all over me and when I moved I received a Electrolyte shock. I realized the more I moved the. More unconscious I became. I was in a living nightmare with all the ****. That the world couldn't handle on top of me .. I finally went unconscious again when I came around again I was buried alive ... and then the torture began everytime I breathed I received a electric shock every time I screamed I was stabbed in the stomach everytime I fell asleep I was. Hit on the head with a sword just to make my life a living death nobody caredmy me I didn't even care for myself but somewhere I still had the desire to live
Chapter 11 After a whole year the king came ti see me I was covered in filth blood and half way unconscious hello the king said I managed to give a weak wimper ahh he said I see you like our torture devices he said with a wicked smile I remained silent and he said well you're rebel friends are planning to rescue you in two years I hope you enjoy the time until then I managed to glare at him Oh he said. I don't think a little torture will hurt you and om going to let you escape with them as a example of what happens to rebel scouts! Again I managed to make a small simper as he started using his electric whip on me
Chapter 12 Its been four years my arms and kegs have been stuck to my body ive been buried alive countless times and Im less then alive I'm only concious 3 hours a day
Today I woke up to my bars being knocked down and I recognized rebel soldiers Hello they said and I managed a heartfelt sob as the put me into a wheelbarrow. As we escaped I noticed that the guards were using breathing masks and one of them was injured. Finally we got back to the camp and dumped me out and left me there
Chapter 12 As I finally came concious again I saw that jack was looking at me. Hello I managed to say hi he said as he hoses me off how did you manage to stay alive he asked me? I do t know I replied although I'm never going back there again Then he asked me as he cleaned me off do you have any clothes I said no and then I lost conciousness
Chapter 13 As I regained consciousness I realized I was wearing a light green dress and silver slippers as I looked around jack said oh goodmorning beautiful why am I dressed like this I asked him and he said oh I'm taking you to dinner tonight ok I said but why am I wearing this duh he said when you were here we figured out that you are a star .. the guardian star of aeraeol and when you gain the power of all the stars you're suffering will be at a end. Oh I said well that's great good he said. Because we are leaving to go to dinner now. At dinner there was mainly venison and salad and of course I didn't need to eat anything so basically dinner was boring.