The last cohort/battle field feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xantam (01), Nov 16, 2010.

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  1. I'm a writer myself this is great 
     
    #21 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  2. Thank you so much
     
    #22 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  3. Post post post post im getting ansy
     
    #23 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  4. Lol my next entry wont have barbarians lol but it will be up tomorow at either 4:00 est or 5:00 est
     
    #24 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  5. O well
     
    #25 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  6. When Tarjes gets there they won't be barbarians. They'll be a army
     
    #26 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  7. But barbarians are an army o_O and they fight like one and like barbarians at the same time =P
     
    #27 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  8. I mean organized -.-
     
    #28 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  9. Like not Huns like ranks
     
    #29 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 17, 2010
  10. Oh lol
     
    #30 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  11. Oh in need more osteroths
     
    #31 *xantam (01), Nov 17, 2010
  12. PART IV DONE POSTING TOMOROW
     
    #32 *xantam (01), Nov 18, 2010
  13. -no hastelamani -good overall
     
    #33 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 18, 2010
  14. That was great! It seems like Edward and arrietus don't trust each other.
     
    #34 *Caliber (02), Nov 19, 2010
  15. Maybe lol and hastalamani wont be back untill part six
     
    #35 *xantam (01), Nov 19, 2010
  16. Damn...

    I'm going to crawl into )•( that hole and die...
     
    #36 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 19, 2010
  17. Im self editing part V and part six will be up most likely over thanksgiving lol
     
    #37 *xantam (01), Nov 19, 2010
  18. Ok
     
    #38 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 19, 2010
  19. Dont worry zaln ill still need your help
     
    #39 *xantam (01), Nov 19, 2010
  20. Zaln will be posting my nee parts from now till next week my internet is down
     
    #40 *xantam (01), Nov 21, 2010
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