Separate names with a comma.
Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Jul 25, 2010.
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It's great, keep goin!!!
Interesting story, but a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Are you sure it was edited?
It's kind of only in a first draft parts have been edited but not all
The usual American fast pace drama.
Hi hunt have u read it
Chapter 4 is up
you really need to work on the grammar and structure...it's hard to take a story seriously when it looks like a 5 year old wrote it