The kidnapped feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Jul 25, 2010.

  1. Post all feedback for the story on here
  2. It's great, keep goin!!!
  3. Great Story!
  4. Interesting story, but a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Are you sure it was edited?
  5. It's kind of only in a first draft parts have been edited but not all
  6. The usual American fast pace drama.
  7. Hi hunt have u read it
  8. Chapter 4 is up
  9. you really need to work on the grammar and's hard to take a story seriously when it looks like a 5 year old wrote it