The kidnapped feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Jul 25, 2010.

  1. Post all feedback for the story on here
     
    #1 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 25, 2010
  2. It's great, keep goin!!!
     
    #2 *cupcake96 (01), Jul 25, 2010
  3. Bump
     
    #3 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 26, 2010
  4. Lol
     
    #4 *cupcake96 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  5. Great Story!
     
    #5 *Irin (01), Jul 26, 2010
  6. Cool!!!
     
    #6 mathew057, Jul 26, 2010
  7. Bump
     
    #7 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 26, 2010
  8. Interesting story, but a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Are you sure it was edited?
     
    #8 *Arazak21 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  9. It's kind of only in a first draft parts have been edited but not all
     
    #9 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 26, 2010
  10. Bump
     
    #10 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 26, 2010
  11. Bump
     
    #11 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 27, 2010
  12. The usual American fast pace drama.
     
    #12 Bendahara_TDT, Jul 27, 2010
  13. Thanks
     
    #13 Mr_Bluejay, Jul 27, 2010
  14. Heyyyy Zach
     
    #14 *Huntsgirl (01), Aug 10, 2010
  15. Hi hunt have u read it
     
    #15 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 10, 2010
  16. Chapter 4 is up
     
    #16 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 10, 2010
  17. B
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    #17 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 10, 2010
  18. you really need to work on the grammar and structure...it's hard to take a story seriously when it looks like a 5 year old wrote it
     
    #18 *JoeyBones (01), Aug 10, 2010
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