The KaW Chronicles Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

Page 5 of 30
  1. Lol I'm sorry readers I forgot to tell y'all I edited the post and I've combined some previously uncombined posts
     
    #81 FeatherHunter, Jan 30, 2011
  2. And edited almost the entire story,little stuff here and there. Y'all might want to reread it just in case!
     
    #82 FeatherHunter, Jan 30, 2011
  3. Ironhulk, this is your second warning! If you post on a story again you WILL be farmed.
     
    #83 Starwars6374, Jan 30, 2011
  4. SUCKS
     
    #84 *IRONhulk (01), Feb 1, 2011
  5. Go to hell
     
    #85 FeatherHunter, Feb 1, 2011
  6. Shutup you noob
    Not you feather
     
    #86 -ShadowAssassin-, Feb 1, 2011
  7. I need a name for two sisters…they are closely nit-
    Choose one or make a suggestion:
    A. Fate and Destiny
    B. Grace and Mercy
    C. Promise and _______ (fill in the blank)
     
    #87 FeatherHunter, Feb 7, 2011
  8. Fate and destiny
     
    #88 Empress_of_Shadows, Feb 7, 2011
  9. I was thinking fate wasn't really a GIRL name lol hmmm maybe Promise and Spirit
     
    #89 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  10.  
    #90 *IRONhulk (01), Feb 8, 2011
  11. Ironhulk you are banned from posting here, if you continue to post, I WILL REPORT YOU!
    No one mention Ironhulk anymore so he won't have an excuse for posting here.
     
    #91 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  12. Everyone ALLOWED on this thread please read page nine and vote.
     
    #92 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  13. Post #7
     
    #93 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  14. Hm....

    Hope and Dispair?

    So different and yet, so similar.

    I think you should try that 
     
    #94 cheesemuffin, Feb 8, 2011
  15.  
    #95 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  16. Sorry everyone I've got some serious editing to do to chapter FOUR
    I accidentally put 3 and messed up with my italics.
    I'm also thinking about adding a future part to it :)
     
    #96 FeatherHunter, Feb 10, 2011
  17. Feather, have you read Salvation yet? Btw, great story so far
     
    #97 cheesemuffin, Feb 10, 2011
  18. Thx and I have cheese it's awesome
     
    #98 FeatherHunter, Feb 10, 2011
  19. Good job Feather.

    One question, did you explain what a serpentine is anywhere? I'm a little confused.
     
    #99 Starwars6374, Feb 10, 2011
  20. Sorry I forgot here it is…
    Serpentine-
    A serpentine is something from the spirit city of Serpents
    Humans with a serpentine
     
    #100 FeatherHunter, Feb 10, 2011
(You must log in or sign up to post here.)
Page 5 of 30