The KaW Chronicles Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jan 9, 2011.

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  1. No. My cat is the best me
     
    #41 cheesemuffin, Jan 13, 2011
  2. ROFLMFAO
     
    #42 FeatherHunter, Jan 13, 2011
  3. I liked it until I saw names of KaW players inside.
     
    #43 Abyssus, Jan 13, 2011
  4. Quit putting in the part that says where to put feedback
     
    #44 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  5. Quit putting in the part that says where to put feedback
     
    #45 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  6. I can and I will ordo it's my decision I get MORE feedback that way.
     
    #46 FeatherHunter, Jan 13, 2011
  7. Nice post I can see my characters personality rather clearly lol
     
    #47 Storallelite, Jan 13, 2011
  8. @ Stora lol thx.


    PART 2 of CHAPTER 2 is up
     
    #48 FeatherHunter, Jan 13, 2011
  9. Good chapter, I like bed...
     
    #49 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 13, 2011
  10. Sry i know its ur choice its just kinda annoying but ok
     
    #50 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 13, 2011
  11. lol its okay but now i dont need to bump and stuff people will know where to go :)
     
    #51 FeatherHunter, Jan 13, 2011
  12. Yea but must it b every post? Would every second work? Or longer posts?
     
    #52 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 14, 2011
  13. Longer posts?hmmmm
     
    #53 FeatherHunter, Jan 14, 2011
  14. Try to put more inti each post. Like, how my story has a lot in each chapter, you should try to make them a little bit longer. It makes it go faster.
     
    #54 cheesemuffin, Jan 14, 2011
  15. Just post less oftan and do longer
     
    #55 Empress_of_Shadows, Jan 14, 2011
  16. I know what longer posts mean lol I was thinking
     
    #56 FeatherHunter, Jan 14, 2011

  17. My friend,clan owner,leader,mentor,and role model for KaW had that to say about me asking him if he'd read the new part of my fanfic!! :) it's a great honor for him to tell me something like that,I greatly respect his opinion.


    Crinus get ready and Cheese you mainly gonna be in the rp parts like battle of FanFiction and Role Play
     
    #57 FeatherHunter, Jan 14, 2011
  18. Hm..... I don't get it...
     
    #58 cheesemuffin, Jan 14, 2011
  19. Lol what's not to get
     
    #59 FeatherHunter, Jan 14, 2011
  20. It is good, but I would put a load of action in it. Tell me when it comes. (resetting in 23 minutes and I'll be named 'wrecker')
     
    #60 grim_reaper2, Jan 15, 2011
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