The Journey Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WW1225, Jul 24, 2010.

  1. Can I b a character? Also can I tell the ppl that r interupting to shut up?
     
  2. Sure I can find a spot, I hope ppl stop interrupting too. Any preferences?
     
  3. I think u should have some other ppl get summoned from earth, such as the boy and girl.
     
  4. I think u should have some other ppl get summoned from earth, such as the boy and girl.
     
  5. I'll b a... Ummm... I'll b that dude from earth
     
  6. Gd idea, I'll c what I can do
     
  7. Ooh I wanna be a character too!!!
     
  8. I'll find a place for u
     
  9. OOOOOH...UTHO IS SOOOOO COOL :lol:
     
  10. Thx, next part will make u look even more horrible. Can't wait!!
     
  11. By horrible I meant that it'll make u look like a stalker
     
  12. They are dwarves!
     
  13. Chapter 9 up!

    So...what do u think?
     
  14. Hey lil sis this is getting betta then ever
















































    Nearly me yet?!?!?!
     
  15. Yes, yes, I found the perfect way to introduce u, I'm sure u will like it.
     
  16. Yay thanks lil sis
     
  17. No problem, bro
     
  18. Can I get a hint?
     
  19. Lol, maybe