The Journey Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by WW1225, Jul 24, 2010.

  1. Chapter 6 posted!
     
  2. Haven't edited yet have you?
     
  3. Please get to me lil sis
     
  4. What r u talking about sammich?

    Next chapter big bro, I promise
     
  5. Yay I have 2 family members now
     
  6. Who's the 2nd?
     
  7. Lollipoplollipop
     
  8. But u r no1
     
  9. Lol because human is something that needs to be addressed immediately lol
     
  10. awww, thx zach

    I was thinking about using something else in place of that gloomi, but I decided that was better
     
  11. It's great!
     
  12. Yeah I  that quote tho... I may steal it
     
  13. Chapter 7 up.

    Comments, feedback, questions, suggestions, r all welcome.
     
  14. ooooooh.....barrier. I'm guessing there are like two different worlds and I live in this new world or whatever you call it. It's getting good! :D
     
  15. Yay hurry up and post the next one! RaWr
     
  16. Utho is on to it, I want to c who can figure it out, I'll post the next chapter in a few minutes
     
  17. Chapter 8 up!

    Anyone figure out where they are yet?
     
  18. R u being serious or r u kidding, gloomi?