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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *krypton134 (01), Oct 13, 2010.

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  1. Lol
     
    #81 TheSilverPanda, Oct 24, 2010
  2. Anyone got a name for the strange man in the tree, with the claymore on his back. He is going to be very important.
     
    #82 *krypton134 (01), Oct 24, 2010
  3. Just a name is needed.
     
    #83 *krypton134 (01), Oct 24, 2010
  4. how bout............LEEEERRRROOOOOYYY JJJJJEEEENNNNKKKKIIIIIINNNNNSSSSS........but really how bout Alexander
     
    #84 german_idiot, Oct 24, 2010
  5. Maybe maybe

    Any more suggestions?
     
    #85 *krypton134 (01), Oct 24, 2010
  6. Awesome job dude, just wondering if my character comes bak in it. It's weird because that fella said don't go through the portal, and bastion said portal but only once ohhhhh. Did I just pick up on something??
     
    #86 *powerfuel (01), Oct 24, 2010
  7. Oh oh oh I know a name.

    Zack
    Lehi
    Jared
    Joseph
    Abram
     
    #87 *powerfuel (01), Oct 25, 2010
  8. Chuk Noris!
     
    #88 TheSilverPanda, Oct 25, 2010
  9. I like zack but it don't suite the character, maybe I'll use that for another character.
     
    #89 *krypton134 (01), Oct 25, 2010
  10. Oh and kaw you are kinda on to sonething lol.
     
    #90 *krypton134 (01), Oct 25, 2010
  11. Yay I thought so.

    Feel free to use the name Zack however you like.
     
    #91 *powerfuel (01), Oct 25, 2010
  12. Kk will do and thanks.

    Still need a name for 3 villains and a name suggestions for the man in the tree.
     
    #92 *krypton134 (01), Oct 25, 2010
  13. Oh yea, btw xantam I ain't killing off the main character just yet. Lol
     
    #93 *krypton134 (01), Oct 25, 2010
  14. I've notices that other stories have much smaller chapters than mine, should I make my chapters shorter, are they too long?? I need some constructive critism I don't know if this is good or boring it seems. Please someone give me a few pointers, this is my first story.
     
    #94 *krypton134 (01), Oct 25, 2010
  15. Rule one of writing:don't relie too much on other story structure to influence ur story ur doing an excellent job with it
     
    #95 german_idiot, Oct 25, 2010
  16. Can people not post anything on the story , feel free to post any thoughts or feedback on this thread thank you.
     
    #96 *krypton134 (01), Oct 26, 2010
  17. I need help? What do i build? I dont know! Please help
     
    #97 LOEV-ToxicTacoMania, Oct 26, 2010
  18. Forges ?? Lol btw this is a feedback thread lol.
     
    #98 *krypton134 (01), Oct 26, 2010
  19. ROFL
     
    #99 TheSilverPanda, Oct 26, 2010
  20. 100th post yay :D
     
    #100 *krypton134 (01), Oct 26, 2010
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