The Critics rate ur story a stars for your planning throught the story. I put this story on the list of books to see! Can't wait for the next chapter.
I thought I made that obvious, ah well. And thanks for the rating Taylor, I'll try have the next chapter up by tomorrow.
Lol Hopefully chapter 3 will be posted soon, it will have most the characters that made it into the story that were posted although their could be a few changes to their Age and or element. There is one problem, there are 2 SAMs!! Lol
Y r they going to japan? I'm just REALLY curious. My mind keeps on making up reasons they are going to Japan! The most reacuring is that they are meeting some other gamers.
Yours will be important later on shaqson, I'll put him in chapter 3, the only thing is I'm going to have to change his element. To many fire guys lol.
New chapter is up, sorry it took so long, its probably full of mistakes. Dont have much time i g2g get ready. ill probably edit it tomorow when i find the mistakes. Hope you guys like it .