The Forever Forgotten feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010.

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  1. Ooo it's exciting. Keep going
     
    #101 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  2. Thx and I will
     
    #102 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  3. Chapter 10 up
     
    #103 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  4. I notice a few mistakes but comp isn't working. Can't fix em. Sorry guys
     
    #104 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  5. 
     
    #105 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  6. Is that the end?
     
    #106 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  7. OMFG!!! You killed me off!!! Damn you!!.... But good story :p
     
    #107 *Agent_X (01), Jul 7, 2010
  8. If it was the end you would know
     
    #108 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  9. Agent we had to make some financial cutbacks and your character didn't make the cut
     
    #109 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 8, 2010
  10. Unacceptable!!! I call boulderdash!!!
     
    #110 *Agent_X (01), Jul 8, 2010
  11. Bullshibizzle!!!
     
    #111 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 8, 2010
  12. Yeah so. Tune in next week to find out hightidez character, Riann, gets cut!
     
    #112 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 8, 2010
  13. What???
     
    #113 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 8, 2010
  14. LOL
     
    #114 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 8, 2010
  15. LOL!!!
     
    #115 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 8, 2010
  16. LOL
     
    #116 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 8, 2010
  17. Ell oh ell
     
    #117 *AngelsEnigma (01), Jul 8, 2010
  18. Chapter 11 will be up. I'm to lazy to wrote it though
     
    #118 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 8, 2010
  19. Im toblazy to write sone of mine ill righg 10 chapters tomorrow xD
     
    #119 *AngelsEnigma (01), Jul 8, 2010
  20. This is no time for writing!! We need to deal with peer!!!
     
    #120 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 8, 2010
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