The Forever Forgotten feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010.

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  1. Makes sense to me
     
    #81 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  2. Kk good 
     
    #82 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  3. Chapter 8 up. It's short though.
     
    #83 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  4. Whoa. Was short lol
     
    #84 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  5. Yeah.
     
    #85 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  6. Gotta do some stuff and then Chapter 9 will be out
     
    #86 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  7. *gasp*  whats next?!?!?
     
    #87 Valfreyja, Jul 7, 2010
  8. I bet I die
     
    #88 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  9. Ima save you!
     
    #89 -Crim-, Jul 7, 2010
  10. Put me in there somewhere...idc how but do it....lmfao put me a dead body on the ground
     
    #90 *AngelsEnigma (01), Jul 7, 2010
  11. Whatchya think crim? U main character so I would like ur feedback
     
    #91 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  12. Idk small, I can see a good ending coming but it also looks to be rather short.
     
    #92 -Crim-, Jul 7, 2010
  13. It's a story on KaW. Didn't wanna make it long and boring.
     
    #93 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  14. Chapter 9 up.
     
    #94 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  15. I made a mistake on it but can't get on comp to fix it
     
    #95 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  16. Pretty good!
     
    #96 *Irin (01), Jul 7, 2010
  17. I guess that chapter was the same as chapter 8 just from Riann's view
     
    #97 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  18. It's good to have both views, especially since they split.
     
    #98 -Crim-, Jul 7, 2010
  19. Amber isn't that big of character. If I put in her view it would be same as Riann's lol
     
    #99 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  20. That's why I liked ur character description crim. It gave me a good way to start a fight. Spoiled rich kid. Good insults
     
    #100 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
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