The Forever Forgotten feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010.

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  1. This is feedback page for my new story the forever forgotten. Plz do not post any comments on actual story. Just post em here
     
    #1 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  2. Story will be up soon
     
    #2 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  3. Prologue and Chapter One up
     
    #3 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  4. Awesome so far
     
    #4 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  5. Cool start :).... Especially that awesome dude Codemaster!
     
    #5 *Agent_X (01), Jul 7, 2010
  6. I always foget it
     
    #6 Irisheddy, Jul 7, 2010
  7. I like it! :)
     
    #7 Bastion, Jul 7, 2010
  8. Prologue short and I forgot something about Alex in Chapter One but I think I'll add it in later
     
    #8 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  9. But uh Chapter 2 is here
     
    #9 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  10. Rofl! Bastion dies asap.

    My character is the main! Oh yeah
     
    #10 -Crim-, Jul 7, 2010
  11. Yeah crim. And uh sorry about all spelling mistakes. I wanted to get it out fast
     
    #11 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  12. I never said bastion died lol. Just that he wouldn't be in Rome lmao
     
    #12 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  13. BUMP!!
     
    #13 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  14. Awesome story
     
    #14 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  15. Thx high. Ur one of the main characters. Not as main as Alex. But Riann is up there 
     
    #15 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  16. It beats being bastion. I mean he's dead
     
    #16 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  17. Or not in Rome!!! That's it lol
     
    #17 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
  18. 
     
    #18 *Agent_X (01), Jul 7, 2010
  19. Lol
     
    #19 Tidalwave-TS, Jul 7, 2010
  20. Ok gotta eat. Chapter 3 will be up soon
     
    #20 *-Smallz- (01), Jul 7, 2010
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