U didnt read it tho. Its been kept in excellent condition over the past 70 years. And we have P-51's flying today.
It was good nice creativity lots of great stuff I need like one or two more (boy and a girl) and I'll b set
Name: Jackie Forl Gender: Female Age: 17 Plane: A modernized Spitfire Plane Weapons: 2 .50 machine guns, 3 homing and a Seeker (thanks for the sweet weapon!) Bio: Jackie grew up in the city in a small apartement with 2 brothers and her mother, her father left them several years back. She always was facinated by the sky and used to climb to the roof of her apartment building to watch the clouds or the stars. She loved the Spitfire ever since she first saw a documentary on the TV about it and wanted to fly one since. Her mother got a strange job offer, Jackie had no idea what it was, and the job managed to pay for Jackie to learn to fly. By the time Jackie was in the Air Force she was an ace, but after a quick trip to Russia she came back to learn that her mother was dead, found in an alleyway. The cops found out that her "job" was covering for the Mafia, leaving no trace for the cops. She was pretty good at that until a murder was found and she was "fired". Jackie has now found this group to join and she is always te first into a fight.
What do you think? Wall me what you thought of it please shaqson, and wall me when you start to write the story.
Name:Tim Age 13 Personality: Nerdy Bio: Tim is proud to be nerdy and guts embaressed when people say he's cool. Tim was a gamer when he was little now he's living his games
Jackie's Spitfire's engines are also high tech even for their time and her Spitfire can make such amazing twists and turns in the air that she is rarely hit.
Culd I change tims age Plane:jaguar Plane weapons: 4 30mm machine guns, 4 cluster bombs, and 3 spit heat seaking missles
Name:Wolfe Plane name:The Falcon Weapons:Electo-magnetic charge missiles, claws(some sort of titanium alloy material used in hit-and-run attacks.) Bio: quiet. Solidititary. He doesn't say much, but when he does you better listen. Very logical and has great reflexes. Age:19
Thank u all for ur time and imagination here is wat I've come up with Please give me ur feedback and the first chapter will b out soon
Srry guys I haven't worked on the book cuz I moved but, i will work on it tomorrow after school and have the first chapter of "The Flying Aces" by Thursday or Friday. Thanks for being such a supportive group