Ohh ok I just read section one lol,, i'm a bit confused as to where you're getting at in the story.. Like is it going to be an action or suspense or comedy? A little confusing
sections 2 and 3 tomorrow. Then no more. I'll drive some people crazy, if the KaW community holds to the standard of the people I ran it by in pal.
Maya grew up as the youngest of 8 and was the only left-handed girl in the family and was the only blonde
Sam 15 Tall-ish, very well built upper body, cannot run for **** Plane - an experimental machine known only as The Ghost Plane weapons - A plasma-throwing machine gun, homing, splitting missiles (1 splits into 6) And for only the most extreme cases, the Redeemer (greatest superwepaon ever created, can turn back tIME in a three mile wide sphere of area)
Name: Alexis "Spitfire" Olivander Description: A tall tomboy with a sleek brown ponytail and black eyes. She has very tan skin and wears black nailpolish. Age: 17 Plane: A sleek vehicle designed for weapons. Has four semi automatic machine guns and two missile launchers. Black and named the "Moon Fire." Bio: Growing up in a military base, Alexis was the daughter of the colonel and a famous actress. After her mother died in a drug war outbreak in New York, she went to a colony on Titan, one of Saturns moons and trained as a gunner. After earning a ship, Alexis went
back to earth wanting to exact revenge on the druggies who killed so many people including her mother.