The Dream Feedback Page

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Ghoomba, Apr 30, 2012.

  1. The Dream feedback page to post all feedback :D You can read story:Here
     
    #1 Ghoomba, Apr 30, 2012
  2. That's a really amazing story!
     
    #2 -FuzzyBunny-, Apr 30, 2012
  3. I like it, however, you did tense change. Besides that, it's quite good.
     
    #3 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Apr 30, 2012
  4. Yeah I noticed the tense change, it's supposed to change. Well, figuratively at least, I'm going to fix it up once the main storyline is finished, There is a TON left to come. Thank you for reading though
     
    #4 Ghoomba, Apr 30, 2012
  5. Great read so far. Please continue!
     
    #5 couchman, May 6, 2012
  6. Good Read
     
    #6 -TheLastTrojan_, May 6, 2012
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