The Demon Chronicles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 24, 2010.

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  1. :/
     
    #161 roflman, Aug 11, 2010
  2. Haha your foot is bleeding
     
    #162 *SameOldRefuse (01), Aug 11, 2010
  3. Lol
     
    #163 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  4. Shoots other
    Here gives cass gun
     
    #164 *SameOldRefuse (01), Aug 11, 2010
  5. Hmph evil people
     
    #165 roflman, Aug 11, 2010
  6. Keep it up!
     
    #166 DarkFalcon, Aug 11, 2010
  7. Rofl yes i am evil >:D
     
    #167 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  8. I dont like u sob
     
    #168 roflman, Aug 11, 2010
  9. Shoots cass
     
    #169 DarkFalcon, Aug 11, 2010
  10. Shoots falcon and card army comes
     
    #170 *SameOldRefuse (01), Aug 11, 2010
  11. *shoots dark* rofl since when did u like hugs??
     
    #171 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  12. I killed him already
     
    #172 *SameOldRefuse (01), Aug 11, 2010
  13. Just makin sure
     
    #173 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  14. Ok
     
    #174 *SameOldRefuse (01), Aug 11, 2010
  15. *gets up and walks away
     
    #175 DarkFalcon, Aug 11, 2010
  16. Um um since i got younger
     
    #176 roflman, Aug 11, 2010
  17. Dark...leg...
     
    #177 roflman, Aug 11, 2010
  18. I like how you connected the characters and such. Besides some spelling errors I think it's a great chapter. Might need a bit more Utho though. lol :mrgreen:
     
    #178 *-Utho (01), Aug 12, 2010
  19. Well I'm not u so F U!
     
    #179 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 12, 2010
  20. that hurts
     
    #180 *-Utho (01), Aug 12, 2010
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