The Demon Chronicles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 24, 2010.

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  1. Cant wait to read bout chp 5 
     
    #121 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 29, 2010
  2. Omg chap 5 FINNALLY done!!!!!!!
     
    #122 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  3. OMG I LOVE IT
     
    #123 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  4. Read and tell me what you think
     
    #124 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  5. It's good
     
    #125 Chocolate_Milk2, Aug 11, 2010
  6. Thank u


    Anything I could add to make it better?
     
    #126 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  7. To long
     
    #127 *-KakashiHatake- (01), Aug 11, 2010
  8. Chap 1 was posted twice and it's kind of short compared to other stories


    Anything else u would like it and elf?
     
    #128 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  9. Maybe a faisal :D i love it
     
    #129 faisal2, Aug 11, 2010
  10. Hey its really good
     
    #130 CrayzJayz, Aug 11, 2010
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    #131 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  12. Than for all the support every1 I'm young so I was expecting ppl not to like the story
     
    #132 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  13. 
    BITE UR TOUNGE

    UR STORY IS AWESOME NOT CLOSE TO A FAIL
    
     
    #133 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  14. I'm still young though so I didn't know what to expect
     
    #134 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  15. Bj ur gana be a writer and im telling u this from now uve got talent
     
    #135 faisal2, Aug 11, 2010
  16. I'm a good writer a school
     
    #136 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  17. Great Story when will my guys be in it
     
    #137 ghosto7, Aug 11, 2010
  18. Can Kantos be a character?
     
    #138 DarkFalcon, Aug 11, 2010
  19. TOO MANY CHARACTERS 
     
    #139 *cassandra101 (01), Aug 11, 2010
  20. IM BACK BIATCHES!!
     
    #140 XxDukeOfTacosxX, Aug 11, 2010
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