The Demon Chronicles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 24, 2010.

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  1. YES i get to fight duke right IM KILL UTHO  jk
     
    #81 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  2. Imma*
     
    #82 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  3. I have 10 ppl reading my story but everyone live it




    bastion told me I have sum spelling mistakes and not many ppl have heard about it
     
    #83 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  4. I tri harde nott 2 hav tooo manie speeling errers
     
    #84 *Utho (01), Jul 26, 2010
  5. Lolz its ok bjorn
     
    #85 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  6. iwrite co does not rlly support me 


    They read chap 1 told me it was crap and stopped


    Cept matt keeps reading it 
     
    #86 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  7. Its awesome
     
    #87 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 26, 2010
  8. I'm
     
    #88 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  9. I know





    Where is Utho?
     
    #89 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  10. U LLIK LLIW DNA DOOG STHT NOMED AMMI
     
    #90 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  11. Ur jel cuz u cnt read it
     
    #91 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  12. Imma demon that's good and will kill u
     
    #92 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  13. Damn u got it 
     
    #93 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  14. It's my story
     
    #94 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  15. U read figured out how to read my secret language
     
    #95 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  16. When do I get paid?
     
    #96 *Utho (01), Jul 27, 2010
  17. Get utho I'm having a party for my clan u want to come?
     
    #97 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  18. NEVAH MUHAHAHAHAHAHAH
     
    #98 *cassandra101 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  19. Great story! Very clever how you decided to take ideas for characters! :D
     
    #99 *Kimber03 (01), Jul 27, 2010
  20. Every1 does tyt but thanx
     
    #100 *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 27, 2010
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