The Demon Chronicles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bjorn21 (01), Jul 24, 2010.

  1. How did u get ur story so popular utho?
     
  2. my entire clan reads it and I have some friends outside that read it a lot. Sometimes I get randomly walled by people saying it's awesome. :cool: other than that, I leave cliffhangers a lot I basically make people read the next chapter :mrgreen:
     
  3. Ohh............

    No1's ever heard of my story but every1's heard of Dragon Tale


    I feel like I'm living on a shadow 
     
  4. awww...it's ok little buddy. And it helps that I have 31 chapters. You only have 5.
     
  5. Yeah but iwrite is all over ur story and I have like 10 ppl reading mine



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  6. iWrite is all over my story? Since when?
     
  7. Bastion and like 600000000000 other ppl love Dragon Tale


    I mean it's good and all but I want more ppl to read it and tell me what they think

    I don't care if they hate it I just want readers
     
  8. Ur story is amazing but I want ppl to read mine it's the same ppl telling me the same thing with my story
     
  9. ill tell my clan. I have some social standing there. My story erupted with comments when I told them t read it. I'll tell DK. My clan's name is Dragon Knights so it has helped with writing. Dragon Tale would not exist if i wasn't in DK
     
  10. I wanna be a character plz . And I've read stories with the different views from the characters and u did it better then those actual authors, seriously. Lol
     
  11. I'm a quick reader... Idk y but I am... N I liked it... I'm not a big fan of fatally n fiction but this was very interesting... I liked how u used words tht described characters n been making each idea flow... There were sum typos n ther could be more details... But not bad... Here's a tip, to make the story cum alive u gotta use the five senses so the reader can see feel taste smell n hear wt is going on around them... Gud job !!!
     
  12. Thanx I type it fast so there r some typos
     
  13. Where is it i lost it :(
     
  14. Pg. 2 of Fan fiction
     
  15. Oh ive read all so far still missing a faisal :)
     
  16. CHAP 6 IS UP!!!!!
     
  17. Poor poor dukey...
     
  18. Ur a fast reader