Cheese I'm not saying you cant give criticism but it should at least be constructive instead of saying it just sucks over and over
If you're so positive... Anything can be viewed constructively. If cheese says it sucks, it gives you a motive to get better, which is constructive. It's like the glass of water.
I'm listening to people who actually give constructive criticism like sr and feather but cheese isn't giving any advice do I won't listen to him
I commented on your poor grammar. I commented on your immaturity. I commented on the way your characters speak. "Like this?" Asked DESTROY3r. "Yeah." Said Cheesemuffin. "Shut up!" Said DESTROY3r. I have pointed out the three most prominent flaws. Actually, let me write a fourth: *scribbles* Ignorant... And... Arrogant. There. Now before you continue *****-ing and moaning about me "not giving you a chance," go fix those four points.
There is nothing wrong with the way they talk. Im doing the talking just like you made the example that's how I was told to do it. Second my grammar is ok I think I'm just writing the way I learned how in school. Thirdly I'm not ignorant nor am I arrogant. Lastly punctuation yes maybe that's not the best but I can't change my habits over night it does take time.
Wow 16 pages of insults and trash talk I can't believe this hasn't ended yet. Its funny and depressing at the same time
@Colly: Remember me from FC? Hey buddy! GET THE **** OUT YOU IDIOTIC ASSHOLE! I bet my asshole has more brain cells than you.