the darkness below

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colin6589, May 14, 2012.

  1. You expect US to give HIM a chance?

    *chuckles*
     
  2. Cheese the truth is I don't expect you to give anyone positive feedback ( look at my story) but yea give him a chance
     
  3. I will post the next chapter in a week it will be
    Chapter 4
    What is that thing!
     
  4. Probably a mutation youshould get it look at by a doctor
     
  5. Cheese muffin not even one positive next post including insulting words I will report that post.
     
  6. So you're going to report Cheese when he hasn't even broken the ToU?
     
  7. Shhhhh Paradox.

    This I have to see.
     
  8. I just want cheese to be quiet if he doesnt like it he don't have to read it
     
  9. Lol.

    That's not a good excuse. 'Don't like, don't read,' is acceptable on fanfiction.net, where you have crappy romances, with SUMMARIES on them.

    Some people read each and every thread in FF. (I do.)
     
  10. (On the pages from when I'm active, that is. Not all 1000 plus.)
     
  11. I just think Its weird that he reads it when he doesn't like it it's just not logical
     
  12. See feather agrees with me
     
  13. People read it even if they don't like it to look for improvement, and tell op whats wrong/right so op can improve.
     
  14. I don't quite think you understand.

    I read most stories that come into Fan Fiction.

    I comment on them AS I SEE THEM.

    I won't sugarcoat it and say "Oh it's the best thing I ever read in the history of lemonade!" If I don't like it, I will say so. If I see a flaw, I will point it out.

    You may be taking this offensively, thinking that negative criticism is just being mean, but get that organ up in your head working and think. If nobody tells you what's wrong with the way you go about things, you will live your life believing you're perfect.

    And then life will punch you in the face that much harder.

    I have already given my criticism, I won't repeat it.
     
  15. How old is lemonade, anyways..?
     
  16. 2,3 years old? /;)
     
  17. Try 100 years.
     
  18. Yeah, 100-150 years, for fizzy alone.
    I'm sure traditional lemon has a broader history.
     
  19. Search engine time~