Whoa whoa whoa... Let me set one thing straight before I start: Stalking me is not okay. I've made a list of things I think you should know. That whole, I disassembled some crap and made a ps2 blah blah not afraid to get electrocuted blah blah blah crashed Microsoft blah blerh blherh blah bleh I excel at writing BLAH BLAH BLAH I made an iPod crap is UNACCEPTABLE. My opinion of you shattered. I was laughing so hard when I read it — heck I'm literally laughing while typing this — I had to grab my sides to make it stop. No one cares about that. And I honestly don't care about your story. I haven't read it. The only reason I'm on this thread and defending you is because some of the other forumers and I already had a discussion about telling people to leave. They can't make anyone leave. And... Letting them believe they have one-upped you is wrong. You are obviously too weak to fight back, so that's why I am doing it for you, dude. Oh, yeah: You can stay forever. They don't tell you what to do when it concerns leaving. Wall me if you have any more problems from these specific forumers who believe they can make you leave.
And again: I have recognized everyone's right to be here and voiced my personal opinion, that some do not BELONG here. I'm aware that that implies I'm telling them to leave, but it's an implication, not necessarily true. I don't have a problem with anyone staying.
Chapter 3 Dark like the grave The five slowly descended towards the darkness down below the world. Anthony reached the bottom and looked around unable to see anything. He said "It's dark down here, real dark." Serena stepped up next to him. She said "Yeah dark like the grave." The other three finally reached the bottom and joined them. They felt around for looking for a trail of slime. After minutes of fruitless searching Anthony pulled out a lantern and lit it. "Thats much better." said Solin. "Look over there!" cried Katherine. "eeekkk! Bones!" screamed Serena. "Are they Prims?" asked Katherine. "No. They are too old." said Anthony. "The slime trail leads down that tunnel." said Solin. The five entered the tunnel unsure of what dwelled within. "how do we know that it's not a mutant trap?" asked Lavender. "We don't. But we have to save Prim" replied Anthony. So they went down the tunnel passing more bones. After they had been walking for a while they heard a low growling sound. *ggggggggguuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrr* "Was that you Anthony?" asked Serena. "No." he said as he came to an abrupt stop. Suddenly the monster attacked the group.
It means if there is nothing nice you want to say its better to just say nothing because nobody can get angry over nothing
And if he doesn't say anything you will continue to write at the same level. You still won't improve. Negative feedback is needed. Not hate, but negative feedback. It's not all dictionaries, chickens, and marshmallows, and rainbows.