The Awakening- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by llIlI_LR-RIPPER_IllII, Mar 6, 2012.

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  1. Whoa I never knew mods could write good stories ;-) I hope u continue! It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! :-D
     
    #21 *EpicGirlyCosmicStar (01), Mar 12, 2012
  2. Paragraphs are for losers. I might add a space between my block paragraphs, but I WILL NOT INDENT!!!
     
    #22 llIlI_LR-RIPPER_IllII, Mar 12, 2012
  3. Lol i dont care abt indents... Just spaces 
     
    #23 Marodo, Mar 12, 2012
  4. I'll edit in spaces when I fix my atrocious grammar mar. Lol.
     
    #24 llIlI_LR-RIPPER_IllII, Mar 12, 2012
  5. Haha, im sure ur professors would be not so happy
     
    #25 Marodo, Mar 13, 2012
  6. Ahhh, now I see why belle goes easy on d_bag.
     
    #26 beatlemania, Mar 13, 2012
  7. Lol mar. I was forced to indent in my straight English courses, but I claimed artistic interpretation in my writing courses 
     
    #27 SuperNova07, Mar 13, 2012
  8. XD
     
    #28 Marodo, Mar 14, 2012
  9. I held my breath waiting for the next chapter....eventually passed out. Woke up a day later and didnt know who I was or what happened. After trolling the forums i came across this story and suddenly remembered what happened and who I was....so now here i am...back to waiting but not holding my breath anymore!!! 
     
    #29 JammyJamJam, Jun 25, 2012
  10. Chapter 3 now added :)
     
    #30 llIlI_LR-RIPPER_IllII, Jul 10, 2012
  11. More chapters! Yay!
     
    #31 LordMaelnik, Aug 4, 2012
  12. Please continue!!!
     
    #32 *Lace-_- (01), Aug 6, 2012
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