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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Jan 17, 2011.

  1. Mmm, so you couldn't stay outta the forums ehh luv? Lmao, great you're back with a new story. I gotta get my own laptop lol. GFs are a lovable pain so I'm not on as much. But I am here for all my darlings on KaW (the FW of KaW [Female Writers of Kingdoms at War]) . Anyway, down to business...

    Name: Zaln Uchida

    Age: 17

    Gender: A Hot Male 

    Personality: Very energetic and amiable. Gets dead serious when it comes to important matters. Loves being able to make friends and is kinda impromptu. He enjoys a few good laughs but acts a little distant.

    Description: Black-haired with a scar running down his pitch black right eye. Prefers to wear black or green if possible with a collar. Also wears long pant usually. Has a sly smile. His hair is usually a little long, about enough to partially cover his eyes.

    Weapon of Choice: Likes slender, but long blades. If not, he will reluctantly turn to dual short swords or a spear if need be.

    I'll check if I'm missing anything else.

    iZaln
     
  2. Ohh... Special ability... Ack, I dunno what has and hasn't been taken...

    My eyes can change to dark green and I can predict future movements and sense anything coming at me in a 360 degree radius of 5 feet. It's like advanced ocular vision. If it's overpowered or anything please tell me. Thanks darling and DF.

    iZaln
     
  3. U zaln are a flirtatious little guy aren't ya
     
  4. I like girls. I hang out with guys. What more ?

    iZ
     
  5. Could anyone tell I was hungry lol.
     
  6. Lol. I don't know, but you just made ME hungrey. Nice chapter. I really liked the apple part.
     
  7. Great chapter
     
  8. Good chapter! A more comical one too.
     
  9. It was a great chapter GlooMi! Other than the fact it made me hungry...
     
  10. Chapter 4 is up. I'm sorry that I haven't used any other characters yet, I just had to write this monster battle cuz I <3 this monster :mrgreen:
     
  11. Very good and descriptive most ppl suck when it comes to describing fight scenes
     
  12. Hey gloomi do you need any other characters or is sign up time over? Lol
     
  13. Hey gloomi do you need more characters or is sign up time over?
     
  14. I didn't think it sent the first one. Weird.
     
  15. Great fight scene!!
     
  16. Thank you all! And DC, it would be great if you could create a monster.
     
  17. Next chapter is being posted as you're reading this. Ordo, I made the reots a little taller, but other than that I left them the same.