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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Jan 17, 2011.

  1. Thank you Star 
     
  2. It's great gloomi! It does sound a bit like the hunger games, but I loved that series. Can't wait for more!
     
  3. Okay thank you! I thought of that too after I read it, but the only thing it really has in common with it is a bunch of people killing each other for entertainment with an irresistible prize at the end.
     
  4. Very good I'm just hope I didn't get dicapitated that's bad for ur health
     
  5. Amazing GlooMi! I've never read any of your other stories but I can't wait to read more of this one!(and I'll probably work on reading the others)
     
  6. GlooMi probably is in my Top 3 KaW writers.

    And for the Hunger Games thing, there's nothing wrong with getting inspiration from great writers.
     
  7.  I  this already. Gloomi writes the best stories 
     
  8. Name: Sphyrdellia Lartuk (Dellia for short)

    Gender: Female

    Age: 17

    Appearance: short brown hair chopped off unevenly at her chin, boring gray blue eyes. Masculine face and callused hands. Strong legs and weak arms.

    Personality: trusts no one and keeps to herself. She has serious trust issues and rarely gives out her name. Would as soon as kill her partner as her enemy.

    Weapon: when her power fails her (which it often does) she will first try and run before using her two medium sized knifes.

    Ability: persuasion. She can talk people Into things easily.
     
  9. Hope I'm not too late!;)
     
  10. Oh yeah, and great chapter btw!

    I got some inspiration from the hunger games as well! I haven't written the story yet though.

    If anyone cares it's basically about this race between 10 girls and 10 boys. Whichever group can get every member of their group to the finish first gets a reward- they get to choose a person from the other group to be their slave.
     
  11. Name: Evelyn Song
    Gender: Female
    Personality: Very Girly, Smart (Yay Go Smart People) And Flirty
    Appearance: Attractive Face, Short Brown Hair, Green Eyes And Skinny
    I Think This The Wrong Spot But I Only Thought of It When I Was Half Way Through Sorry
    Special Stuff: Going To See What other People Have
     
  12. Age: 17
    Weapon Of Choice: I Know I've Put Bladed Fans In like Every 1 But Those Story Have Been Like Dumped
    Special Stuff:
     
  13. Chapter 2 is up. it's also less exciting
     
  14. Is it too late to sign up?

    Name-Dylan Drakon
    Personality-kind, but destructive
    Weapon of choice-large battle axe and small throwing axe
    Special Ability-can go into rages where he slaughters everything except his partner
    Gender-male
     
  15. Great job! I especially like the detailing. Not too much, but not too little.
     
  16. Nice chapter GlooMi!
     
  17. Lol story you read eragon recently lol
     
  18. Special Stuff: Poison Any Poison WhatsoEver Does not Harm her I Does the Complete Different
     
  19. Yours doesn't need any weapons or abilities Pease lol
     
  20. Very nice chapter GlooMi!