The Arena: Signups and Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Jan 17, 2011.

  1. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    Ill wait for him to post here 
     
  2. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    Who?
     
  3. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    Delphin df he's a real creative, funny, nice, likes leather and girls, and an all around good guy
     
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    Name: Crolux Grey ( nickname Crocro if u want)
    Gender: male
    Appearance: medium length dark brown hair. Ever so slightly tanned. Defined muscles, but not too big. Light green eyes, though the right eye is half brown ( a green-brown split down the middle) not bad lookin but could be better.
    Personality: not terribly brave but will stand up for friends. Funny and good with people. Flirtacious although doesnt notice it. Fun to hang around with but serious when it comes down to business.
    Weapon: a large bow capable of shooting arrows at once. Strong steel arrows, two small daggers and a small throwing knife
    Special ability: able to blend in with surroundings, expert archer and can reload arrows quicker than anyone else

    Hope ya like it gloomi!
     
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    Oops forgot age: im 16
     
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    Hey u stole my guys flirtatious nature cro
     
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    Hero
    Name:Benjamin Imura
    Appearence/age:Tall, black hair one green eye one blue eye. Wears a black robe, father was a fighting monk who trained him extensively before dying in battle. 17 yrs old
    Weapon:Kusarigama-Japanese weapon with Four parts: handle. A blade on one side of the handle and a chain on the other with a spiked metal ball at the end. Also carries two lightning-bolt shaped daggers imbued with ability to control weather
    Power:controls weather, particularly lightning
     
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    Oh personality: very quiet but has lots of opinions. Not friendly but not mean or spiteful, always stays calm and thinks everything through as much as time allows.
     
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    Monster: griever
    Frenzied humanoid but with a complety featureless face. Covered with crisscrossed battle scars and seems tortured to insanity, kills even other monsters whenever it can.
    Has super long(two foot) slashing steel fingernails and can run at blinding speeds. Covered in a natural exoskeletal armor with a small chink in the lower middle back. Dark grey to black coloring and never tires because it is fueled by unsatisfiable rage. Hunts alone because they kill each other
     
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    THEY ARE SCIENCE MADE HUMANOIDS. THEY HAVE NO PARENTS, NO BACKGROUND, NOTHING!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    YAY! your writing a story!
    Human:
    Name: Katya
    Gender: Female
    Age: 17
    Appearance: Brunette, green eyes, petite, looks younger than she really is.(about 12) Oval face.
    Personality: Ambitious, daredevil, music lover, patient, friendly and genius
    Weapon: Her voice/music, but as a solid weapon: twin daggers
    Special ability: She has a very beautiful voice and can produce beautiful music that can make people go to sleep or die.(depending on the song)
    If it's too much you can cut soem of it out :)
     
  12. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    I like that one
     
  13. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    Lol hey stora
     
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    Name: Maxine Sypan. (prefers to be called Max)

    Gender: Female

    Age: 16

    Appearence: Dark red/brown long straight hair that she always has pulled back into a braid/pony tail. Light green eyes, short. High cheek bones, pale skin, slender. Her fingers are a little longer than other peoples.

    Personality: She's kinda quiet, but very loyale if you somehow become her friend. She will do anything she can to defend her friends, even if it costs her her life.

    Weapon: She prefers a bow and arrow, which her long fingers are perfectly suited for.

    Ability: Invisibility. She can stay invisible for an infanite amount of time if she concentrates hard enough. The one draw back is that anything and everything can disturb her concentration. So it's more of a weakness unless she is completely zoned out and oblivious to the rest of the world. Otherwise, it would be better to run.

    I'm so glad youre writing another story and I can't wait to read it! Also feel free to change anything you need.
     
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    Monster

    Name: Reot

    Personality: agressive if provoked, semi inteligent, uhh curious(for lack of a better word) they will walk rite in front of u and try to understand u and how things work bla bla bla), can be tamed if done rite

    Appearence: beak, crest on head, hunched over- 3ft full hight 2 ft hunched over as usual, 4 legs front 2 r pincers- 1 foot long relatively thin , purple,red,blue, and green eyes, scaled-shell back

    Weakness: stomach tender getting stabbed there will kill

    Abilities: fast, best eyesight

    Extras: sometimes in packs usually run aroun alone
     
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    Jaynox Hyrephad
    17
    Male
    Pale skinned, tall, thin, bright green eyes, short brown hair.
    Not shy, just silent. Hostile to all but a few people he likes or respects; determined, but always fights fair.
    Telekinetic or whatever it's called (the thing where you make things float).

    Hope u like it Gloom
    P.s. Ur stories r awesome (not kissing up or anything, they're awesome)
     
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    (Forgot, the weapon) short sword + a dagger w/ a wicked looking blade (two weapon's r fine, right?(if not, large two-handed sword))
     
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    Monster
    Name: Zekarn
    Personality:aggressive, intelligent, and curious sometimes it will kill everything in it's way to study something
    Appearance: humanoid, horns on head, eye on the back that can open and close, one eye red other yellow, black with yellow zigzag stripes, tiny spikes on the waist
    Ability:surronds itself in eletricity for around 1 minute then it drops and it will return in 15 seconds
    Weakness: eye on the back is the most vulnerable point
     
  19. Re: Story that is not yet titled: Signups!!!

    For some reason this story idea reminds me of the Hunger Games.

    Either way I'll try the sign-up later.
     
  20. Will add story to index tomorrow.