The Agent feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by german_idiot, Dec 2, 2010.

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  1. Sorry I was trying to get them to stop posting.
     
    #41 *Caliber (02), Dec 19, 2010
  2. Eh ur ok.....ur lucky I can't trace ur iPod
     
    #42 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  3. Really? You can do that?
     
    #43 *Caliber (02), Dec 19, 2010
  4. With the stuff I got I can find out what sort of condiments u put on ur burgers
     
    #44 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  5. Oh
     
    #45 *Caliber (02), Dec 19, 2010
  6. Nice update German. Keep em coming.
    Seth
     
    #46 seth73, Dec 19, 2010
  7. Thnx Seth I'll try to get three in bfore Christmas
     
    #47 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  8. Oh damn I didn't notice that cazaz in the third line lol
     
    #48 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  9. Starting on new chapter hopefully up tonite or tomorrow
     
    #49 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  10. Awesome. Will my charecter be in the next chapter?
     
    #50 *Caliber (02), Dec 19, 2010
  11. Soon hopefully
     
    #51 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  12. Ok
     
    #52 *Caliber (02), Dec 19, 2010
  13. Great chapter
     
    #53 CrayzJayz, Dec 19, 2010
  14. New chapter up tell me what ya think
     
    #54 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  15. Good good sorta reminds me of bond
     
    #55 TJ_Wolfsbane, Dec 19, 2010
  16. Thnx I was actually trying to go towards a Tom Clancy feel to it but I guess bond could b ok too lol
     
    #56 german_idiot, Dec 19, 2010
  17. Kk
     
    #57 TJ_Wolfsbane, Dec 19, 2010
  18. Tom Clancy is geared more towards realism. I'd say this is a mix. You have some things I could be nitpicky about, but you still keep it interesting. Keep it up, brosef.
     
    #58 *Gen_Spartan (01), Dec 20, 2010
  19. Eh fair enough but I'm pretty sure military aren't using trifocals anytime soon lol..............or mayb they r
     
    #59 german_idiot, Dec 20, 2010
  20. Bump for mayb new chapter soon
     
    #60 german_idiot, Dec 22, 2010
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