Here's another chapter, it's a little shorter than the next few. It looks long, but it just has a lot of dialogue. Feedback appreciated, especially in the form of criticism. (But not in the form of trolling.)
SUPER happy you choose to do Phantom of the Opera. I absolutely love it. The story is really good so far. Keep it up Smighter, I love this one. Few errors but hey, mistakes happen. I'd give it 9/10 so far. Keep it up! Oh, did you know there's a sequel to Phantom of the Opera?
Another chapter even though I haven't even finished the next one yet. Writing is starting to get easier, starting to. Enjoy? It's a little short, again.
Also, thank you Tiger for always be here for me and reading/feedbacking. Eh I need to stop posting and sleep. But I'm not tired. Yes you are.
You've cleaned up a lot of the errors after the beginning: HOWEVER, I enjoy going back and rereadinging things. I think you would profit most if you cleaned the blocks of description for new and re-readers. The story seems nice, but I can't sit down and read a story with seemingly realistic people in it (even though most 8th graders are not six feet tall). It's just a personal prefrence, and sucks that I can't read these. Genetics suck. Keep it up, blah blah blah, go back and fix the first stuff if you have a computer and are not too lazy, blah blah blah. Have a nice life if I never talk to you again.
Eh I should have added like a, "Leaving Icarus out in the swirling fog" or something. I'll have to fix that tomorrow. I'm sleepy.